I think that what you typed made a bunch of sense. However, think about this, suppose you added a little content? I ain't saying your information is not good., however suppose you added a post title that grabbed folk's attention? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is kinda boring. You might glance at Yahoo's home page and note how they create article titles to get viewers to open the links. You might try adding a video or a picture or two to grab readers excited about what you've written. Just my opinion, it would make your blog a little bit more interesting.